Liskook

Hi! I see you’re into Liskook. I don’t mean to bother you but it would be a great help to know your thoughts on my first Liskook inspired story.
          I’d be very grateful for your help.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/272294065?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=AnslayHerrera&wp_originator=pwh7oystNtNjSY53JiGDau3HtgNChuLioAwBFLdoKLH6IzwuOmPlOQdJ4f2dggaFX6djRebee9dV%2Bj2qPdJshzG78HjfkVmr5KpNBiP%2FWk6hY7Wxlfeed%2B08wulTMbtH