I wouldn't put it past someone to tell me that no one was reading my story. I can't even fathom why I wrote the thing in the first place. I can barely relate to this story other than the fact that she was a lesbian and her mother hated her. so, if you liked the story, I am truly sorry, but I will probably end up deleting it. perhaps you can add onto it and fix it if you want. I wouldn't care. I would be interested to read it in fact. writing just isn't my forte, sadly. I love to write, I am just not creative enough to write about complete fiction.