Maddie

195% of everything is crud.
          

186,282 miles per second: It isn't just a good idea, it's the law!
          

170,141,183,460,469,231,731,687,303,715,884,105,727
          

16000 kilograms and what do you get?
          

your story is really good so far i dont know why no-one has fanned you, you have got to keep writing it, would you mind if i use is as my book of the chapter, i can promote it and see who reads it after