switching to my alt to rant abt this even tho its a while ago
“like the punctuation is all over the place" cool! so thats just how i write! so sorry i have a different style to how you write!
im all for ppl pointing out typos and such in my writing - i dont beta read so i will ABSOLUTELY miss some errors - but like, other than that, dont give advice if it wasnt requested??? like maybe its bc i cant read tone well with texts and such, but it feels more like hating more than constrictive criticism....
tldr : dont give 'constructive' criticism if it wasnt asked for, thx <3