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-Odiul_
Somebody give an award to mxtx for having the most confusing writing style for a danmei author yet. YOU CAN'T SAY A CHARACTER PERSONALLY INTRODUCED HIMSELF TO EVERYONE AND THEN SAY HE NEVER PAYED THEM ANY PERSONAL VISITS. THAT WAS AN IMPORTANT CHARACTER PART YK?? LIKE BRO DO YOU JUST WANT TO RUIN YOUR OWN CHARACTERS? Look I love the story, I love the lore, and I do love the characters (for the most part), but please your writing style makes no sense mxtx ...
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SchneckeJo
@-Odiul_ IT IS SO TRUE QWQ the story and characters and all are great but omg this writing style is gonna kill me one day ._. Wdym we're mid-scene, mid-dialogue mid-whatever random flashbacks for the next 100-200 pages? Or better, WDYM THAT GUY GOT A DAMN SWORD STICKING IN HIS STOMACH AND HE JUST GETS UP, PULLS IT OUT AND GOES AWAY LIKE NOTHING HAPPENED? THAT DUDE INVINCIBLE OR WHAT QWQ (I'm sorry I can only cry every time again with that scene)
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