LizzyKlaassen_
I really enjoyed your story!
If by any chance you have time, would you like to check out my story? It’s currently ongoing but I’d love to hear your opinion about it!
Kind regards!
-_-Kay
@LizzyKlaassen_ im glad you liked it but i've only posted the characters so far..and i read yours- the idea is so unique! i'm new to this so maybe not yet at the level of giving opinions but maybe you could break up the lengthy paragraphs a lil bit? it sounds pretty lame but i think it'll help a lot with readability! but absolutely love the story! :)
