-bbyuchiha
should i drop a chapter tmr guys
Takashiu
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Okay I'm thinking this differently in strategy The fifth Hokage really fucked up on this operation she should have gotten more shinobis than four and that's all be honest she's a different beast entirely she's been working her entire life for the sand villages special forces she is completely opposite and Gaara has not given them the proper information they only know what she likes and dislikes not how many people she has killed in her reputation and her cure of her sickness personally leave her the fuck alone I don't try to capture her because her brothers care about her she's been abused by the village and everyone else she's technically a war hero and she's not doing this to satisfy any thing else she's pretty much doing it to help Garaa she gives two fucks about Naruto and the Akatsuki she cares about what she likes and to put her life on the line to do it
Takashiu
@bbyuhiha but that's the difference in my head they thought a sick and dying version of her half blind and pretty much used harshly to the village this is a full healed one
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-bbyuchiha
@Takashiu operation lotus tea has also fought against her before, so we never know..
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-bbyuchiha
my wifi is back up! chapter will be out today.
Takashiu
@-bbyuchiha Am I allowed to punch your Wi-Fi to work again if it fucks up*getting knuckle gloves*
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-bbyuchiha
guys the keiko chapter was meant to come out yesterday but my wifi is not letting it</3 so sorry for the delay, im going to try connecting to a different rounter tmr and reload it. it will FS be out this week dw.
-bbyuchiha
keiko. tomorrow. long chapter. watch out.
-bbyuchiha
my writers block is insane rn
Takashiu
@-bbyuchiha I know what you're feeling I just got to figure out how I'm going to do my stuff Best way yet Hope is just reading other fanfiction or any other stories I got some ideas for my fan fiction and I got it from A place called choice of games The stories is called Samurai of Hyuga give me some ideas of what I'm working with with swordsman skills
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whathaveibecomerip
Come HOMEEEEE
Takashiu
I actually think your character is powerful to a good extent actually to what measure I would say is to a Kage level because well it's the training she had as a young child but also surviving so many scenarios and her staying away from other villages who want her and want to use her or cash in a bounty knowing how much money she has on her head when you think about she is lucky and a good sense and gambling but also in tactics and strategy thanks to living with grandmother of the puppet masters but also her own skills as an Uchiha but also the skill set of understanding a situation where she's being used but that's the thing her biggest weakness is individuality she has people she loves but being used she's now being used by the Akatsuki last time it was the leaf by your own clan first second with the sand And now third but the third is very different subject because she is not going to hurt people she loves so I want her to find it Sensei outside of the Akatsuki and seeing the other two Uchihas caring about her to keep her away from Obito shows it some wonder to show her individuality to understand herself and gain clarity because that's what she needs the most clarity cuz she's always going with the emotion Right now she it's a mix between Itachi and Sasori cuz they both play a big picture in her life as siblings in their own way And they both know it and I bet the puppet master will never let her be used by the Akatsuki too because that bond of being a puppet master is there so she has three people who love her and care about her in the Akatsuki Even if the Akatsuki members don't show it out Right and I really want Sasori to talk to Itachi about it because well not by blood but they're both brothers with the same sibling And I don't think he wants her to be like him
-bbyuchiha
i love your insight on this! however i’m going to say this and try not to spoil but sasori will play a different role in this story. he’s going to have a different impact on keiko and keiko will have a different impact on him, but their relationship won’t be what you think!
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Takashiu
Sasori is that interesting character I will say this personally his why he killed his third Kazekage not just because of his power because he might have been the one who ordered his mother and father to fight against kakashi's father pretty much a suicide move in him being young enough to understand it maybe bring him to being closed minded they didn't focus on his skills and training even if it made him push away his allies and friends and became a soulless individual because he was always focused on one individual who took everything away from him when you complete your goal that your single-mindedly into it you'll be a soulless creation of your own choosing and being used by the Akatsuki shows He had nothing left to live for and that's why he gave information to Sakura out of his free will because the last thing he ever did of his own choosing his own art and always getting arguments with his rival about art is eternal is the only thing he had a good time with but a deep connection having this character of yours into this world with her and her being trained by the same grandmother that they both physically had changes things for him it's a little light in the major darkness of his life making him connected in certain ways And that is what's dangerous it's at one individual is threatened he's going to go back to his way of when he killed the Kage because he'll be so narrow-minded to it
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-bbyuchiha
i hate school.
Takashiu
@-bbyuchiha I understand that pain but I have work and I've been working on non-stop in a warehouse and not getting my work done for my story
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