LisaFraser5

I love your story Daisies. It’s really interesting I saw where you wrote that you didn’t like the first ten chapters but they’re great. So don’t write that again lol . Anyway what I find interesting is the relationship between Mr Ricci and Daisies Mom as employer and employee. I love how that’s the way the teenagers met because of their parents and I like how the two adults relationship isn’t forced or unrealistic. You’re really an imaginative writer so don’t be so hard on yourself. Keep writing young writer.

PalmKiss

If you don’t mind could you read my new story MEDUSA it’s about a black Medusa goes from mortal to monster it’s not complete but I should be able to finish it tomorrow it’s a short story with a promising ending