@-ditzydollface - Hey author! I just finished reading Wild Heart and I’ve gotta say — I really loved it. Marina instantly reminded me of the telenovelas I used to watch, and the outfits you’ve given her are honestly perfect. You bring her character to life in such a vivid and stylish way.
I adore how you wrote Marina — her attitude, her confidence, and the way she stands her ground while still commanding respect. She’s such a powerful, unforgettable character. And the chemistry between her and Brian? OOOOF. You described their connection so well that I could feel every spark between them. Her bond with her family was beautiful too, and the fact that she has a son added so much depth to her story. That moment when Dom finally told her the truth about why Jakob left? That hit hard.
Now with Marina and Brian heading toward a reunion in Miami, I’m dying to see what happens. Will she remember him? And if she doesn’t, will Brian take the chance to build something new with her? And if she does remember, I’m so curious how she’ll react.
I also love how you connected her to the second movie by making Monica Fuentes her older sister — that’s such a fresh twist! I can’t wait to see how that plays out. And I’m still wondering whether Marina left Damian with Mia or took him to Miami. So many interesting possibilities.
I have a few suggestions too — not trying to sound like a know-it-all, just sharing thoughts as a fan who’s genuinely enjoying your work! There are some grammatical issues and places where the story could be a little more organized. Longer chapters would also be amazing because I’d love to see more interactions between Marina and her family — more moments, more emotion, more depth.
