
Emma74706
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Hii so I just read your “My Brothers Best Friend” book. I thought it was amazing. Your grammar was on point. You used impeccable detail. And I loved the plot twists. Although, I wish it wouldn’t have needed that way. So, I thought I would reach out and maybe give an idea. So instead of him dying because that kind of made the book have a sad ending and usually when you read a book when your done reading you want to be left with a happy and sweet ending. So I was thinking, maybe you could write another book about how she overdosed and went to the hostpital. But while she’s there she hears the name Oliver weather it’s from a pharmacist or a doctor she hears it and it instantly reminds her of him. Out of curiosity she goes to walk around since she still hasn’t been released from the hospital yet. While walking around she hears a familiar voice. After some time she realizes. It’s Oliver. She run up to him and she starts freaking out and so does he. She says something like “but this can’t be possible my mom said you didn’t make it.” And then maybe he says something like “wait but your mom say YOU didn’t make it.” And then they confront her and then they fall in love again and have a happy ending. Again just an idea. But I would really love to read something like that and I’m sure others would too.