Finally making some headway on “Spider Shinobi”!! I’m very excited with the plot I’ve made up and my next plans for Peter.
Though, I do have some major issues with how I started the story. When I wrote the first chapter, I had told myself (repeatedly) that I wouldn’t go back and rewrite anything or restart the story. So, I won’t do that… too much. I’m planning to go back and change some smaller details while keeping the bigger picture. I’m not happy with how Peter got to the village, so that’s probably going to change. And I’m not happy with how corny Peter’s introduction to the village and the Hokage was. My final and main issue is how much Kakashi is in the book from the get-go. I want this book to feel a bit more sophisticated than it currently is and I feel like this lackadaisical atmosphere is due to my lazy writing.so, I really want to go over it and remove (or space out) some of the Kakashi parts. I want it to be a slow-burn. Also, it feels like Peter is obsessed with Kakashi already and the book literally just started (。-∀-)
I’ll be posting a notification in the book to inform those of you who are following the story when I do it. I apologize if this will disrupt your current enjoyment of my lil passion project, but you gotta do what makes you happy ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃ (and fixing these things will make me immensely happy lmao)
Anyways, thank you so much for reading my fanfic and I hope you enjoy it (just as much, if not more) after the changes!! <3333
