-wiItedflowers

old @ was dramaticc_16

-wiItedflowers

the L in my new username is a capital eye
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Polllardii

I suffer from fatigue, so it is difficult for me to find time to read on here.  I will read a couple of your chapters though.  Thank you Dyna for replying to my message about muting/blocking, you were the only one who replied!  I hope you have a good experience on here.  I have loved it and made friends with all ages and all nationalities which is, for me, the best part of all.  See you soon!

Polllardii

@dramaticc16 -  That's good.  It is hard to explain.
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-wiItedflowers

@Polllardii Yes I do understand what you meant by changing tenses, I watched a few videos on using tenses correctly and it really helped. Thanks again
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Polllardii

@dramaticc16 -  Did you understand what I meant by changing your tenses?  It is hard when starting out writing to understand everything.  There is so much to learn!  I will try to give you an explanation on the last paragraph of your first chapter.
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