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@-xene- Mwhahahahaha

@Pastel_Yaoi_Baby not tHe ChEESE

@xene-me UwU

@Fyodor_The_Rat same here♡♡♡

@xene-me It's fine! I hope we can be friends!

@ xene-me  yes you might notice that at the beginning, but expressions improves when it comes to the rest of the story
            Thanks for the advice

@montalona np xx. I noticed u tend to have a few run-on sentences here and there and ur choice of words is off sometimes but ur story is very interesting and left an impression so gd job♡

@xene-me Oh lol. Thanks for telling me. :'D Thank you, you as well.

@MissReads19 Hillo. I'm not new to wattpad, just deleted my old account but ty haha♡ Enjoy ur day as well :)

@xene-me thanks dear. That really means a lot to me. (^^)❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

@mohammed_0304  dnt bring urself down, when I say its 'good' I seriously mean it. I know its a broad answer but I need to read more of it to delve into specifics. Ur writing style is definitely above average and ur characters feel more than just words on paper. But If u feel like the book isnt portraying what u want it to, change it! Thats what I eventually did.
            
            When I have time tommorow, I'll go back to comment the mistakes I found. And since I have my hands full with work and class for most of this week it'll take me a while to find some free time to read ur other work :') I promise to check it eventually tho!

@xene-me thanks for the compliment but I'm still not sure about my story being 'really good'.
            
            I kinda like the second story better though. At least to a certain degree, I was able to write down precisely what I was seeing in my head. I hope you enjoy it and thanks for the correction. Please leave an in line comment in the paragraphs that are having issues. I'd really appreciate it. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

@xene-me Aw thanks, that means a lot.
            
            Cheers!

@HassanTheAthenian np. ur writing style is very clear and ur able to create a very vivid atmosphere in ur story so I'll probably check out ur other book later. Gd job♡