I love dear ,it's wonderful .I just think you should elaborate more on how they will come together ,will they letter remember, will they marry in the new world, what happened after they met .You can write a sequel or something ,tnx the story is beautiful even without editing ,good piece of art .
Hi! Thanks for voting on 'the Chosen One'. I hope you liked the book though it does need a lot of editing. (I was 15!) Do tell me what you think about it.
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