Jumberly
Cheers mate, I'll give it a read. Try posting your work on Writeon...AND, join scribblers http://scribblers.freeforums.net/. Its a site that the folk from Authonomy (Harper Collins' writers site) are moving to. They help those people will give you 'free' will be amazing (it quiet just now - authonomy is clossing in 3 weeks) Seriously - they'll edit - proof read - give genuine feedback - advice on publishing...just because they love to do it. Changed my book, maded in way stronger. dave