KEKKO_cat
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hello! im curious, why put my story into the “nope” category? im open to constructive criticism to make my story better! -luv ya <3
KEKKO_cat
@00Night00Star00 that makes sense, though the 5th chapter is where most of the action happens in the backstory. its hard to write them because backstories do tend to be a bit more boring than the rest of the story. thank you for your feedback, looking forward to when or if you do read more of it!
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00Night00Star00
@KEKKO_cat For me it was the fact the origins were dragged out, and I prefer a bit more action in the earlier parts.
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