KEKKO_cat

hello! im curious, why put my story into the “nope” category? im open to constructive criticism to make my story better! -luv ya <3

KEKKO_cat

@00Night00Star00 that makes sense, though the 5th chapter is where most of the action happens in the backstory. its hard to write them because backstories do tend to be a bit more boring than the rest of the story. thank you for your feedback, looking forward to when or if you do read more of it!
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00Night00Star00

@KEKKO_cat For me it was the fact the origins were dragged out, and I prefer a bit more action in the earlier parts.
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KEKKO_cat

ohh, that makes sense! in your opinion, how can i catch reader’s interests earlier in the story? or what can i fix to enhance the first 3 chapters?
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YourLocalBookworm57

Thanks for adding my story to your reading list! :D

YourLocalBookworm57

Oh! Sos, I try to change it up from the others I’ve read but I see it’s not really working. Though, it is changed up in future chapters (I pre-write chapters) such as 29, 31 & 32. I also haven’t seen many villain rehab stories that keep Izuku’s original personality.
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00Night00Star00

@YourLocalBookworm57  It means that I either don't like the story or its to similar to another story that I like and don't want to read this one. In this case it was to similar to another.
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YourLocalBookworm57

Just curious, what does the ‘nope’ list mean? (Sorry if I sound rude)
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