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Hay if any of you could, could you please give me feed back on the text down below. I part of a new book im writing called run rabbit run, which is a crime thriller, and I would be amazing to know what you guys think.
There's an old phrase I live by. "If something bleeds, you can kill it", from the tinniest of birds to the human on top of the food chain, we all bleed. And if they bleed then....they can lie, and cheat, and backstab the one that trust them and they can die . That why I don't trust anyone, that why I can kill anyone . If it bleeds then they are just another lose end, a mistake, A being that would do anything for there own sake and well being. So when everyone you ever known, or looked at is like that, I quite easy to kill them, before they rat me out. Don't blame them, I really don't, with the price hanging around my neck, you could become scum to star in 5 seconds flat. But then you would have to catch me. And since I work alone, and end anyone that gets in my way, destroy anyone or anything that could lead to me, No proof that I was ever there, or anywhere. I have two words for you. Good Luck. Well I say I work alone, I do, it just, im very good at getting people to get what I want, and im even better at taking what I want from someone, even if they don't know there even doing it. I Bet you if people, streets to home famous, police to even you sitting reading this now on your device, found out how much you help me, how much you help me find what I need, to killed many, so many of my victims, you'd cry, shake you heads in disbelief , carry made up guilt on your shoulder till you can't take it anymore like many others.