Pau

Wow… the whole underwater atmosphere felt so alive here. The way Nerion’s voice affected the currents and even the corals literally made the scene feel like a visual movie moment.
          But that sudden silence after the high note?? That hit so hard — I could actually feel the shift from magic to fear.
          I’m already curious (and low-key worried) about what happened to his voice. This is such a strong opening.

Greetings, my name is David Lomerio. If you have an interest in my narrative, it is entitled 'Kiss Me Before September.' I encourage you to read it, as it is likely to appeal to those who appreciate dramatic storytelling. I look forward to receiving your support for this work.