0FTHEFALLENSTARZ

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Bro why are people so comfortable leaving hate and disguising at as “criticism.” Like I KNOWWW the writing is weird in the beginning of the book, I was fucking 13/14 writing that.. I’ve explained so many times that I’m going to go back and fix it. I don’t need more of the “I’m cringing bad,” or “I would not say this,” comments bro….. Like a simple “the dialogue could be better!” Is fine!! It will not hurt my feelings, just be honest not mean. Like if you’re gonna critique everything, just write your own story at this point

fizzypopzzzaa

@0FTHEFALLENSTARZ exactly bro  idk why everybody has to hate on anything and then call it “constructive criticism” when it’s literally just hate
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0FTHEFALLENSTARZ

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Bro why are people so comfortable leaving hate and disguising at as “criticism.” Like I KNOWWW the writing is weird in the beginning of the book, I was fucking 13/14 writing that.. I’ve explained so many times that I’m going to go back and fix it. I don’t need more of the “I’m cringing bad,” or “I would not say this,” comments bro….. Like a simple “the dialogue could be better!” Is fine!! It will not hurt my feelings, just be honest not mean. Like if you’re gonna critique everything, just write your own story at this point

fizzypopzzzaa

@0FTHEFALLENSTARZ exactly bro  idk why everybody has to hate on anything and then call it “constructive criticism” when it’s literally just hate
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I was trying to parallel the ep7 bathroom scene with that Season2 Jancy scene,, SORRYYY y’all if it was too much  ^_^

fizzypopzzzaa

@0FTHEFALLENSTARZ IT WAS NOT TO MUCH DWW I loved it i just didn’t expect it at first
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