0HATEN0

Well im going to be starting a new fanfiction after forsaken heroes is finished. 

apexfortnite

Hello 0HATEN0’s just a question what happened to forsaken hero’s and also are you done making fanfics or a personal issue?

Uundersstate

And Forsaken Heroes is Dead.
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Uundersstate

Username is logicalillogical here is the link to my account
            
            https://m.fanfiction.net/u/12738572/
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Uundersstate

@apexfortnite I switched over to Fanfic.net recently 
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ForeverObsidian

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Yeah bitch I came to your wall since I'm considering the other people feelings because I think about other people. Unlike you. So 1st of all bitch I don't think I'm better than everyone, I just think I'm better than you. Bitch you've been trying for me since day one. So since I know that your nowhere near my location you cant show up n show down so you need to sit down and shut the fuck up. If you was near me then bitch you've been drug like a water hose through a garden. You pressed pissy pussy popping punk. You tried it hoe, you tried it. So what now bitch.

Uundersstate

You definitely wanted the last word lol.
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ForeverObsidian

And that will be all. 
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RealxEyes

Hey uh... Its me. I've been meaning to ask about some thing. I just want some tips on how Naruto got neglected by his parents. 
          
          I've created this fanfiction based on Naruto and Sasuke where of course Naruto's parents are alive and he had a twin sister and two younger siblings 
          
          Although, Naruto was forgotten except his twin sister. He and Sasuke found a mysterious device and the both of became the two in one hero. 
          
          Fo you think its a great summary?
          I just want some tips thats all

RealxEyes

Basically, two in one means that two beings/things become one like two heads are better than one. 
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0HATEN0

Well you can go with multiple reasons. You can use the route I used. Where they sealed the soul of the Kyuubi into Naruto and the chakra of the Nine tails into the other children, so Minato and Kushina would train the ones with power and ignore the one with the useless burden. 
            Or you can use the route where Minato or also Kushina are being manipulated by an outside force, like someone controlling them with a genjutsu.
            Or one with the shinigami. So instead of Minato paying with his soul for the sealing, he and his family lose the love they have for Naruto. 
            
            It’s a good summary but what does two in one here mean? And I’ll give you a tip. Make sure your chapters aren’t too short. That’s annoying. I’ve seen a lot of fanfics with great ideas and stuff but the execution is crap, like too short chapters and other reasons. 
            Well good luck.
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