I read the comment on my book, Promise Me, that you wrote and I just wanted to say, thanks so much for reading my book. And I am thinking about writing a sequel to it. But it would be in one the p.o.v.'s from either Mae and Harry's, Lily and Liam's, Carmen and Zayn's, Allison and Niall's or El and Louis' children. Ya know, when their in their teen years. SO the story isn't completely over yet!! :D
And for writing tips.... I was reading over your story Hired or Loved, (which is great btw), and one of the tips that I would recommend doing is make sure you capitalize the 'I' in your sentences if it's one word? Does that make sense? For example, instead of saying "oh, i think she went that way" you would capitalize the 'I' instead of it being a lowercase 'I'. And when a character is talking to someone, or thinking about somebody and using their name, make sure the beginning letter of the first name is capitalized, too. And try not to change p.o.v.'s so much. It throws the reader off. I know in Promise Me, I did that a lot. I tried not to, but I needed to get everybody into the story. And when Kennedi meets the boys, make sure you include ALL the boys, and have it not focused on JUST ONE. And make sure Allie is included too. But other than that, your story doesn't need much help. You're doing a great job on your own. <3 update soon!!!
xx- Lily
