100TheLoneWolf

Hello everyone,
          	I'm in need of your input! So as you may or may not know, I'm writing a sort of DW fanfic, and I feel like one of my characters, Wolf, could be even better with more of an edge. My idea was that her powers have a serious impact on her. Meaning, when she she uses her powers a lot or when she gets carried away in emotions or battles, she becomes more "evil" than good. Not evil like in a villians kind of way, but more like a dark side that emerges. A scary, usually dorment side of her. But to do that, I feel like I should be a little more darker and heavier in my writing. Now what I wanted to ask opinions about is if that style of writing fits the theme of DW? I want to know what you think. Do you think this idea might work?

thedoctorcried

@100TheLoneWolf you’re so welcome!! i know this place can be a bit like shouting into the void sometimes, so I’m really glad I could help you out
• Reply

100TheLoneWolf

@thedoctorcried You did help me work out some ways to include my idea into the story. I already had some ideas about the 'why' part of it and I think I now know the 'how' part as wel. I thank you for giving me some advice and also for helping me be more sure of my idea :) I really appreciate it!
• Reply

thedoctorcried

@100TheLoneWolf you can definitely do it! I would advise you to think really carefully about what the rules are surrounding her switching between the two. What triggers her to become bloodthirsty? is it injustice? is it desperation? it shouldn’t feel gratuitous at any point - your readers should be able to clearly see why she’s gone berserk beyond ‘it would be super cool in this scene’. so long as the switches are understandable, it should be fine I think. otherwise you risk readers being totally snapped out of the story when Wolf starts acting the complete opposite to usual. 
          	  
          	  btw the same applies for her returning to morals from berserking. what calms her down? what snaps her out of it?
          	  
          	  just a few things to consider :) hope this is helpful
• Reply

100TheLoneWolf

Hello everyone,
          I'm in need of your input! So as you may or may not know, I'm writing a sort of DW fanfic, and I feel like one of my characters, Wolf, could be even better with more of an edge. My idea was that her powers have a serious impact on her. Meaning, when she she uses her powers a lot or when she gets carried away in emotions or battles, she becomes more "evil" than good. Not evil like in a villians kind of way, but more like a dark side that emerges. A scary, usually dorment side of her. But to do that, I feel like I should be a little more darker and heavier in my writing. Now what I wanted to ask opinions about is if that style of writing fits the theme of DW? I want to know what you think. Do you think this idea might work?

thedoctorcried

@100TheLoneWolf you’re so welcome!! i know this place can be a bit like shouting into the void sometimes, so I’m really glad I could help you out
• Reply

100TheLoneWolf

@thedoctorcried You did help me work out some ways to include my idea into the story. I already had some ideas about the 'why' part of it and I think I now know the 'how' part as wel. I thank you for giving me some advice and also for helping me be more sure of my idea :) I really appreciate it!
• Reply

thedoctorcried

@100TheLoneWolf you can definitely do it! I would advise you to think really carefully about what the rules are surrounding her switching between the two. What triggers her to become bloodthirsty? is it injustice? is it desperation? it shouldn’t feel gratuitous at any point - your readers should be able to clearly see why she’s gone berserk beyond ‘it would be super cool in this scene’. so long as the switches are understandable, it should be fine I think. otherwise you risk readers being totally snapped out of the story when Wolf starts acting the complete opposite to usual. 
            
            btw the same applies for her returning to morals from berserking. what calms her down? what snaps her out of it?
            
            just a few things to consider :) hope this is helpful
• Reply

100TheLoneWolf

So, eventhough at first I didn't want to publish my stories, I did publish one part of one story. I just want to see how it gets received by people and base the publishing of more parts on that feedback. So please feel free to check it out, you can leave a comment but be nice about it... Writers should respect each other and help each other become better :)

100TheLoneWolf

I'm in need for someone who, is fan of doctor who and who would like to read something I've written. I need to check if my writing style is good and if it fits the theme I'm going for. Are there people who are intrested to help me out with this? It is just one part.

100TheLoneWolf

Hello!
          I know it has been years since I wrote again (or been online here for that matter) but I never stopped creating various stories in my head. I've just went through a few huge changes in life and they did shape me even more as a person. I'm ready to pour all that I am and that I've learend into stories, old and new ones. But as you can see I haven't published anything and took the old stories offline. This is because I feel they need to be revisited. However, this might or might not upset a bit, but I'm not sure if I'm willing to publish. BUT, I am willing to share with select few people (preferably someone who knows the topics) to see how people think about it. I need some review in my new style of writing before I feel I can share them publicly. So please, feel free to message me if you're curious about what I'm writing or if you just want to chat :)

100TheLoneWolf

Hi, I'm really sorry I've been so inactive on this platform but a while ago I started suffering from a depression. Making it that I kind of lost interest in almost everything I loved before. So I decided to take a break and focus on my therapy program and other things like videos. This way I feel that I'm starting to get motivated again and I really hope I will find my love for writing again very soon. But for now I might stay inactive. But I still really love all your support and all your works. Keep strong and keep doing what you do best!

100TheLoneWolf

Hi 
          
          I'm working on something but you won't be able to see it yet as I'm not really sure about it for now.  I wasn't sure about the storyline and the writing itself, so I worked on it on my own. And as soon as I feel it fits the rest of my story, I will be posting it for you as well. I'm just a little unsure at this point so I'm going to put some extra time in it before I post even a draft. Hopefully it ends up being a good desicion and it all comes out  great. 
          
          Please pray for me, I can use it. Haha! 
          Thanks for sticking around. Love you all!

100TheLoneWolf

Hi everyone
          
          I know I said this before but I promise this time, next week I'm going to be back at writing. I took a bit of extra time to get all those emtions, that came with breaking up, out of my system and now I feel I'm going to be able to focus again. Which is very nice. I want to thank everyone that stuck around and that understood my situation. I really appreciate that. 
          
          So next week I'll be starting up again and we'll see what that brings us. Slowly getting back in my old routine. 
          
          Thank you everyone that still support me and I hope to all hear from you soon

100TheLoneWolf

Hello 
          I'm sorry I dissapeared again but I went through emotional hell with my relationship and now I'm trying to survive the break up. So my head wasn't really into writing as I couldn't focus on anything. 
          I'm hoping that next week I'll be able to focus on it once more and that I can make the effort to write every day again.
          
          I hope you guys can forgive me and I will be back as soon as I can. I promise I'll let you know when that happens. I really hope next week..
          Lots of love

TheSlythrinPrincess

@100TheLoneWolf It's ok I just finished a relationship roller coaster and I am still recovering take all the time you need to recover
• Reply