AluraFlare

Hey I'm wrote a Jungkook oneshot! I would love it if you could check it out, here's an expert:
          
          
          You sat on the swing set, the sun shinning on you, making your tears more visible then before. The trees shook their branches, as if crying and mourning with you. The willow trees swaying in the breeze. 
          
          The clouds parted and a ray of sunlight fell on your check, you choked back a sob and covered your face with your hands. Your whole body shaking with the guilt and sadness as it fell on you like a filter.
          
          You took in shaking breaths, memories haunting you.
          
          
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          I hope you can read it and give me some feedback! Have a wonderful day/night darlin!