NeelofarAamir

Hi!
          I really liked the chapter you sent.
          The story has potential.
          Don’t take me wrong-it can go on to become soo much more,but do not let it be a cliche.
          The same Big Bad Wolf hero,or a sadistic Alpha.
          I like the strength the heroine is showing.
          We need more of that I think.
                        Thank you for sharing it with me.Cant wait to read the rest:)