@ShadowDragon43 So as we know by now i didn't finish the story by the 29th of april, i've been pretty sick this past week (just a bad cold) so i haven't done much writing, but the good news is that I'm about half way done, so hopefully it will be done by next week or at least during next week! yeah, idk, i just wanted to update you so you know i'm actually working on it even though i didn't post it yesterday.. And also I might have misunderstood what you said with your suggestion, but i’m not sure, it does contain what you wanted, but maybe not in the way you expected? well either way i do hope (and think) you will still like it, haha