@1234Molly__ I thought your story sounded really good! :) I don't know what you are planning to do with it, but if I were you, I wouldn't make it one of those typical super-strong alpha takes in the weak, little girl who can't defend for herself stories. There are already too many of those on wattpad. It would be cool if she turned into someone really cool, but you don't want to have her rejected for that to happen though. There are too many of those stories too. I don't want to try to change your whole story, but listen to this: so there is a boring girl who is a werewolf. There is an amazingly hot alpha who is a part of the rival pack. She really wants to be noticed by him, but he doesn't pay any attention to her. Then all of the sudden her appearance slowly starts to change. She becomes this super hot girl that everyone wants. While this is happening, she kinda forgets about the awesomely hot alpha. Then you could have some major plot twist like: woah, those aren't her real parents,and she is something besides a werewolf. Or, what! Her parents are secretly the runaway king and queen of the entire supernatural world and she has a bunch of sick powers or something. You know, something insanely crazy like that. You can do what ever you want with your story, but this would help it to really stand out. Hopefully you will take my ideas into consideration. I look forward to seeing what you do with it! :)