123romancewriter456

two new chaps of "Fractured Perfections" are out :)

mmmMANGOS

Hiiii! Ok just read 'her revenge' and wanted to give a little review!
          (slight spoilers)
          
          OH MY GOSH! Literally had me hooked in the first 5 chapters. This has definitely made my top 5 books EVER. And I have a read my fair share. The flashbacks were seamless and character development peaked throughout the book! The s3xu@l tension between the 2 main characters, itched a scratch in my brain. AND HOW DARE YOU MAKE SOMONE DIE LIKE THAT. I WAS NO JOKE CRUSHING ON HIM AND THEN POOF. But ughhh I see what u did there making them lovers before, Sebastian one of the finest book bfs TO EXIST.
          Yet there was also some repetition and unclear POVs at times, but nonetheless thoroughly enjoyed
          But I have a few questions too @123romancewriter456 !
          1. Why did Seb have a house in NY conveniently at the same time Vi and Nik were there?
          2. In the start with the flashbacks, where was Emilia living that Seb could talk to her at night?
          3. Did you sometimes mean to spell Dimitri like "Dmitiri"?
          4. The b10ody dagger, she never established her preference for her name, at times she's was Vi or then she was Mila, was confused. Can you confirm if she wanted both?
          
          Anyways lots of love from Australia and ps hope u liked my additional comments xoxo

mmmMANGOS

Ahhhhh hi!! Tysm for ur reply. And ty for answering my questions, it helped hahah. 
            Best of regards :))
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123romancewriter456

@mmmMANGOS ahhh i’m so glad that you enjoyed the book!!!! honestly this just made me smile so much <3333
            
            first i wanna say sorry about the little killing off, i knew from the start it was going to happen and i cried the entire while writing it tbh 
            
            anyway to answer some of your questions 
            1. seb was also in ny as the same time as vi and nik because of the mafia gala and he also runs majority of his business from there so it made sense for him to have a home there 
            2. seb and his family moved in with emilia and her family for a period of time when they were younger, it isn’t said in the books but is because the spanish and italian mafias were having dramas with other mafias and they were working together 
            3. honestly it was probs a typo, the book is so unedited that it makes me cringe tbh lol 
            4. so after everyone found out she was it was a very confusing time for everyone and they didn’t really know what to call her and vi/mila herself didn’t know what she wanted her name to be, so that is why it switched around a bit, but in the end she decides that she just wants to be emilia and it’s apart of her growth as a person
            
            i hope this helped to clear some things up and if you have any other questions let me know :) 
            
            also yes i loved all of your comments and thank you so much for your support <3
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