13tasu

@purpleblackberry 
          	Hey my names Tasneem and I'm no professional critic. Just a girl who loves reading and experiencing new worlds through books:) 
          	Please don't take any of what I say at heart and I'm only saying this because you seemed to want to know:)
          	 I originally read this book quite a long time ago and making this list just recently I realized I didn't remember much about it just that it was a normal book. As a person who reads almost a book a day, for me to remember a book it has to have a lasting impression on me. When I read a title I know what the book was about but for this I just couldn't remember. This is why the book was in the 'ish hokay' list. 
          	As to why it may not have left a lasting impression on me I cannot really say as I'm just a reader whose never studied story writing or anything like that. I cannot speak about grammar and stuff because god knows my grammar is atrocious..hehe:) 
          	When you messaged me I went and read the book again. The first 2 chapters grabbed my attention and I finish every book I start so I did just that. As an audience I say towards the 5th chapter onwards and the end it just dragged on with repetitions of every action. I could go into more detail about that. I read the sequel again too to really understand the point of the first book. Maybe If the political scenarios were explained more often and the main character grew as a person which I don't see until the first chapter of the sequel
          	
          	I repeat this once again this was just my opinion and you don't have to listen to a word of it. Keep writing what you like however you like it and don't change it just because of my opinion:) It was nice speaking with you and always here to help.
          	Kindest of regards
          	Tasneem

13tasu

@purpleblackberry 
          Hey my names Tasneem and I'm no professional critic. Just a girl who loves reading and experiencing new worlds through books:) 
          Please don't take any of what I say at heart and I'm only saying this because you seemed to want to know:)
           I originally read this book quite a long time ago and making this list just recently I realized I didn't remember much about it just that it was a normal book. As a person who reads almost a book a day, for me to remember a book it has to have a lasting impression on me. When I read a title I know what the book was about but for this I just couldn't remember. This is why the book was in the 'ish hokay' list. 
          As to why it may not have left a lasting impression on me I cannot really say as I'm just a reader whose never studied story writing or anything like that. I cannot speak about grammar and stuff because god knows my grammar is atrocious..hehe:) 
          When you messaged me I went and read the book again. The first 2 chapters grabbed my attention and I finish every book I start so I did just that. As an audience I say towards the 5th chapter onwards and the end it just dragged on with repetitions of every action. I could go into more detail about that. I read the sequel again too to really understand the point of the first book. Maybe If the political scenarios were explained more often and the main character grew as a person which I don't see until the first chapter of the sequel
          
          I repeat this once again this was just my opinion and you don't have to listen to a word of it. Keep writing what you like however you like it and don't change it just because of my opinion:) It was nice speaking with you and always here to help.
          Kindest of regards
          Tasneem

purpleblackberry

I don't even know how to preface this so I'm just going to throw it out there haha I noticed you placed my book the next stop in your "hish okay" reading list and I was kind of glad; here's why. it's been a very very long time since I have received any constructive criticism so I was hoping maybe you could tell me why you thought it was just ok. It's like nearly impossible to hurt my feelings. My self confidence is a bullet proof vest haha thanks in advance!