17caratcarrots

so due to the ridiculous length of the woozi oneshot...i apologize ;; but...as an apology gift and a thank you for 1k votes: here's a teaser hehe 
          	
          	Your heartbeat slowed, an overwhelming wave of fear threatened to drown you immediately. His eyes stared into yours, an inexplicable pain exploded forth in your chest because there you could see; defeat. 
          	
          	This was what broke you. Not the difficulty and impossibility of your love, but the idea that even he was giving up. Your legs crumpled from under you and your voice listlessly echoed behind his disappearing back. 
          	
          	"Please don't go."

17caratcarrots

so due to the ridiculous length of the woozi oneshot...i apologize ;; but...as an apology gift and a thank you for 1k votes: here's a teaser hehe 
          
          Your heartbeat slowed, an overwhelming wave of fear threatened to drown you immediately. His eyes stared into yours, an inexplicable pain exploded forth in your chest because there you could see; defeat. 
          
          This was what broke you. Not the difficulty and impossibility of your love, but the idea that even he was giving up. Your legs crumpled from under you and your voice listlessly echoed behind his disappearing back. 
          
          "Please don't go."

celestialice_

Finally I find oneshots with nice flow 

celestialice_

@17caratcarrots keep up the good work. Fighting!
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17caratcarrots

@celestialice_ i'm glad something i just do in my spare time (for myself) can bring enjoyment to others, honestly, writing for me was hard at first, but as time went on and i wrote more, the smoother it comes.
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celestialice_

@17caratcarrots yes, that is so true. When you're not satisfied by what you read, you can just write (well, one can't just easily write). Anyway, I do enjoy your stories. Good job. Aju naisu~
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