1915Sky

Hey, beautiful, your story is great. The first chapter it's perfect. You have to re check your description of story, there are spelling mistakes. Edit it and it would be perfect and I suggest you to add the work of both of them. Like he is a Mafia and she is a student. So, it will brought attraction more. Keep it up. You are doing great. All the best. 

1915Sky

@1915Sky your welcome. At first don't expect in return from anyone. Just give your heart in the story. Appreciate and be grateful and hope for the best. May you achieve the top ranks.
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authornazi__

@1915Sky thank you cutie beauty author....thank you I'm  so exited...
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tanuu44

1915Sky

@tanuu44 welcome and all the best
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tanuu44

aww, thank you dear
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underworldcrown

Long time no see huh? Kya chal raha hai sweetsky? Ghar pe sab thik? 

1915Sky

@underworldcrown you too tc I purple world to you
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underworldcrown

@1915Sky thankyou so much sweetsky, take care i purple you 
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1915Sky

@underworldcrown hey, dont take pressure Or tenth hai to kya, bas poore saal padna alright revise hi karlena nhi padna hoto but karna theek hai warna end moment sab bura lagega you will be demotivated and under pressure, and I don't want you to regret. You are the best and you can do it All the best and yes I am trying to find the best for my convenience  be happy princess I am here alright
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mifagun

Good morning didi kaise ho....tum 

mifagun

@1915Sky thank you meri didi jaan ...sahi kaha tumne khud pe focus karne ko ..vahi karne jaa rhi hu ლ⁠(⁠´⁠ ⁠❥⁠ ⁠`⁠ლ⁠)
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1915Sky

@mifagun hey, sorry for late replying but hame esa lagta hai ke sab theek hai khush hai siway hamare, Or hum itne bhi kamzor nhi hai ki ye sab jhel na ske, duniya dhokebaaz hai, kyunki hum log wese chunte hai, or agr nhi choose karna kisiko to akele jiyo, kya farak padega? Pata hai, hum pareshaan hote hai dusro ki wajah se lekin wo khush rhte hai, to bewakoof kon hai hum ya wo? Jo life me unka sochke time waste karre hai? Itna sochogi to kese rhoge? Hume kisi ki jarurat nhi hai hum jese hai acche hai understand? Roz activity karo jo tumhe pasand ho? Ho ske to social media se dur rehna, kuch ni milta siway khokli cheezo ke, dikhate kuch or hai or karte kuch or. You have a bright future shine like a star Rozi career pe focus karo, jab  hum khud pe focus karte hai na to sab bekaar lagta hai you are brave
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mifagun

Hello didi kaise ho tumm

1915Sky

@mifagun hn karliya din um accha hi tha bas Boring tha 
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mifagun

@1915Sky aapne dinner kar liya ?? Aapka din kaisa tha
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1915Sky

@mifagun hii Rozi I am fine
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mifagun

Hello didi kaise ho tum ...mai rozi hu ...yaad ayi main.

mifagun

@1915Sky yeah ..he he I am that rozi
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1915Sky

@mifagun ooh, its alright yeah I remember we talk about your science stram come in you can make it hard work pays off everytime you know
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mifagun

@1915Sky so my introduction i.e khud ka hi roast hehe
            
            My name is rozi ... Urf lazy duck ...I sleep all day then cry just before the exam ....like a cow ... seriously hehe ...also somehow even after being so bad in maths I still take science...and rest is history...he he
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underworldcrown

How are you sweetsky? Long time no see right? 

underworldcrown

@1915Sky I'll try to give my best and enjoy the remaining time, have a nice day sweetsky
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1915Sky

@underworldcrown hey, it's just your way of thinking, your age your class your workload studies gonna make you feel mature but it's depends on us how we want to be please choose yourself
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mifagun

Hello didi kaise ho tum ??

1915Sky

@mifagun Esa hi hoga, In Sha Allah, lekin uske liye, sab chod kar focus karna hoga, padna hoga, dua bhi action ke sath kaam ati hai, samjhi
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mifagun

@1915Sky insallah Kaash aisa hi ho thank you yr..
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mifagun

Good luck yr..for your exam ache se do aor mujhe genuinely lagta hai tum bohat ache marks se pass hougi

1915Sky

@mifagun hayyy, how sweet girl
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