@DardanQerkini1996 So I've read the story,
I didn't write review on comments section because it felt awkward.
As reader I liked the story.
As writer, I feel that the Narration is good, plot is unique, story setting is also very good (I loved the modern feel and simultaneously the historical vibes) but the gets too descriptive.
For dialogues were okay, I can't give much advice on them because I struggle to write dialogues myself
The families part are way too confusing tho. Reading all that is Overwhelming for me. Prorogue was informative, well written.
I think you should add a family tree flowchart.
If possible when you mentioned character designs in the story, add a picture of the character too. That would look visually pleasing.
This just my opinion,
I liked the story (。•̀ᴗ-)✧