1ABCD23456

Happy Diwali and Halloween! 

1ABCD23456

@DardanQerkini1996  So I've read the story, 
          I didn't write review on comments section because it felt awkward.
           As reader I liked the story. 
          As writer,  I feel that the Narration is good, plot is unique, story setting is also very good (I loved the modern feel and simultaneously the historical vibes) but the gets too descriptive.
          
          For dialogues were okay, I can't give much advice on them because I struggle to write dialogues myself  
          
          The families part are way too confusing tho. Reading all that is Overwhelming for me. Prorogue was informative, well written. 
          I think you should add a family tree flowchart. 
          If possible when you mentioned character designs in the story, add a picture of the character too. That would look visually pleasing. 
          
          This just  my opinion,
          I liked the story  (⁠。⁠•̀⁠ᴗ⁠-⁠)⁠✧

1ABCD23456

Lately I'm getting bored of anime. I am unable to find any good ones. Does anyone know any mind-blowing anime ?

mizuki_twin

@Honeyrose112 It's actually really nicee! Like you've gotta check it out, especially if ur a sports anime fan. Like the animation, the theme, the story and the frdships uk it's all srsly so worth ur time! Welp that's my review, hope it helped :)
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Honeyrose112

@akutagawatwin oo~ I never watched sk8 how is it? 0o0
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shiz2790

My friend sent me this, so please try it! 
                    1) Close your left hand
                    2) Find the one different number
                    8883888888
                    3) Make two wishes
                    4) Send this to fifteen different people
                    5) After sending, open your hand and look at it!