1Classical_Heart8

Anyone got this money thing for the beta program? 
          	I don't understand it at all.

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Had plans for a new chapter but I have total writers block,  so Saturday night it will be

1Classical_Heart8

Im trying to do chapter involving her friends but its hard
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1Classical_Heart8

@FantasyDreamerGirl I will,  I need to write a chapter now but I dont kno what to write about
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A_weird_imagination

@FantasyDreamerGirl  k also if u ever need help just ask meee
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1Classical_Heart8

Hey everyone,  I will be doing some major editing. Which mean I will be fixing the Prolouge as well but thank you for staying with me and supporting me. I know you r probably sick of me but I ask that you please stick with me and continue reading my book. I promise I will deliver!

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I have a question for every writer here,  do you ever doubt your/book sometimes? 
          
          I feel like my book isn't good enough,  and its frustrating me because I really want this book to be published. Where. I get frustrated I break down and quit,  this time I don't want to quit. 
          
           I quit once and I don't want to do it again,  I just don't know what else to do. 
          
          Should I change the point if view to where its narrated? 
          
          Should I go back to chapter one and start from the beginning and work my way down to the end? 
          
          This is the one thing I want to accomplish, Im not good at anything but I can fantasize. I guess I just want people to feel or understand what the character is feeling. 
          
          If anyone has any advice please share

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I feel like I haven't really delved in to my characters past if that makes sense
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1Classical_Heart8

@FantasyDreamerGirl thank you that helps a lot
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Caleb_Raheem

I think it's all about finding your process. So, for example, I'm always thinking up scenes as though I'm watching a movie, and I convey all the elements I'm able to convey. Whenever the mood strikes me, I return to that scene and think about all the different elements I'm able to picture in my mind, and see if all of those elements were conveyed to the reader. 
            
            For example, Simon sat in his chair waiting for the news about his wife. 
            
            But, I could expand: Waiting for news about his wife, Simon sat in his chair, unmoving even when minutes turned to hours. 
            
            Same scene, different picture.
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