@Kaity_Marie_Horan Hey, I love your idea, it's definitely not cliche and used so well done. :) But, I do think you could alter Amy and Zayn's first encounter? The way Zayn finds out about Amy is an idea that I've seen before, and I'm thinking you're a writer who prides herself on being unique and original. I just think there are different, more unique ways of writing that part, but I'll leave you to think of your own creative ideas. It sounds really great otherwise :) Don't be afraid to send me a message when/if you post the story, I'd love to read it! :D x Good luck