Hi I just wanted to say that I like the concept but the whole rave idea you got wrong. I honestly don't mean to be rude but it has to be with more DJ's and trap and trance and you have to give a specific name to every rave, because there is different festivals about it. And a concert with one DJ isn't a rave it is just a concert alone. Sorry but I just wanted to tell you that. And you might think wtf is this bitch thinking well I've been listening to EDM, trance,trap,dubstep, house, electro for a long time so I know how raves are. Also you didn't capture the main idea of a rave. And talk about more than one DJ and we are twining because I was writing a story about a raver and now I'm writing a new story cause the last one didn't work out okay so yeah. Bye, please take my advice
