@1Dlova13louisT it's has pretty good storylineso far, but I don't know much about gymastics so I won't be of much help to you there. You might want to run it through spell check for some grammar and punctuation errors, but so far so good!
@1Dlova13louisT thanks! That means a lot to me. I'm a VERY inexperienced, young, and aspiring writer, so thanks! Like I said before, if you ever need help with anything, just ask!
@1Dlova13louisT Do you like my book so far? Anything that you think I can change? I need people's opinions:) Also feel free to ask for anything if you need it, I'd be happy to help =]