Matt

I am posting the first chapter of a story I'm writing. It's in poem format and still in rough draft, but I would like to hear feedback about clarity and what you think.

Anyone who still wants to read my poems, I updated Wattpad with a few more poems. I will be checking every day now and therefore, more will be added soon. I have been working on setting some to music, and successfully got the beat and vocals to "Every Fire I'll Walk Through" and "Never Let Go" of the first book, Insides and Out. Since I'm not good at guitar, I may use a program or ask someone to help write out music that fits it. Thank you all for voting, fanning, and commenting. You have no idea how much it means to me. :)))) Expect more soon, so keep in touch ;D Peace for now.

Hey Matt. Are you okay? 

Hey Matt I just read your status... Just wanted to know if you're okay and if I can help
          
          Don't do anything you might regret...... 

@Possessed @BOOKGEEK37 You both are welcome xD Any time and any day ;)

Thanks so much for fanning me!  Luv ya :P

@1corruptsoul Thank you for becoming a fan Matt :)

@ThunderrXD Welcome :)

Thanks for the fan!

@misscb Oh, very welcome :) I must read more!