Hey so far it's really good. Keep going. I'm not the best writer, but I'd advise you to make sure you double check for grammar or spelling errors before publishing. Also you should use less "•", I get that you're trying to make it longer but it's pointless. Hope your story gets popular! @bandsbabeee
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