1w4nn4kmsplss

If you'd like something specific to happen in the book I'm waiting for ideas

MyExtremeMelancholy

Hello, it seems you followed me for my story, can you tell me how was it?
          Context of the story
          Theories
          And advise?

1w4nn4kmsplss

@MyExtremeMelancholy English is my second language too and I suck at descriptions☠️
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MyExtremeMelancholy

Ohh I see
            I should have used more synonyms
            But if you notice, I used different things after we got information about the character, like he white haired, I called him the white haired boy
            But when his name was given I used izuku.
            Well thanks on the review. I will make sure to get better at English so I would be able to write better and yes English is my second language.
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1w4nn4kmsplss

When I'm writing I'm always like "how tf do I describe that-?" Cause I don't like to repeat myself-
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Hyp3rVigilance

Thanks for your support on my book! And for following. Congrats on 3k for your book!!

Hyp3rVigilance

Well, 7k now!
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Hyp3rVigilance

:)
            No problem!
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1w4nn4kmsplss

@Hyp3rVigilance tyy
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yumiela

Thank you for following me, author-san :)
          I love your work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

yumiela

@No_one0730 no problem, your story is good.
            thnx for the update :)
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1w4nn4kmsplss

@yumiela omggg tysm djdjjdjsjshs I didn't think much people would like the story honestly jsjsjsjs
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