Hi I recieved your comment on my story, you can use the boarding school for paranormals theme, someone else already took it aswell so I don't care =] And for my story it seems that you're the only one that can't keep up because I haven't had anyone say anything like you did, plus have you read any of the stories that are on the what's hot page? They start relationships between characters in the second chapter, and based on what? Nothing. You also said my main character hasn't been written in much depth, seriously most people don't care about that, they care about what the character brings to the story and what they do to other characters to bring drama and an actual plot to the story=]