@Weezie_24 No problem. I have supremely enjoyed those of your stories that I have read, and can't wait to read more. It isn't often that you find stories that have proper grammar, punctuation, capitalization and spelling. I also find your idea for The Girl in the Fountain to be unique, despite the concept having been done before, I've never read it like this. Amaryllis isn't a Mary-Sue, she's weird, and she reacted realistically, instead of just going "Oh, well, this happened, guess I'm stuck here, now, and I'll throw myself at the first man that catches my fancy," like so many stories I have read before have done. I want to thank you for putting so much effort into your stories (the effort you put into them and the passion you so clearly have for them is obvious). Stay BE-YOUTIFUL, darling!