Heyyy, I read ur book, the untamed bonds: reborn. I didn't read the first book, so I didn't understand a lot of stuff.
But in general, ur book was very vague, which was a major sign of it being written by AI. I don't mean to accuse or anything but I have a genuine question. Did you really use AI or was it ur intent for the book to be vague, fast-paced, and flavorless?
And even if you did use AI, it's okay, everyone makes mistakes. But you should learn from them.
I want to tell you that you can write so much more beautiful than a soulless machine. Don't be afraid if your writing is horrible at first; everyone starts out like that.
That's all I wanted to let you know. I hope you'll take my advice.
