Why'd you take your books down? I know your re-doing them, but still people get a look at how you write and they can help you with plots and give you hints on were things don't make sense or sounds stupid.
Hello Mysterious bestfriend, calling you John Smith from Pocahontas is just weird and babe makes me sound like a lez so if you want to keep your identity i'm going to call you Mysterious bestfriend. And you really should post that surfing book, You may say that you suck at writing but the only way to get better is to try, post it and people will tell you what they think of it.