Heartache by the numbers

This is another one of my short stories from creative writing. https://www.wattpad.com/story/164935819

I just posted a short story that i wrote for creative writing a while back. Feel free to critique it and give me some criticism. https://www.wattpad.com/story/164934281

Hey guys I just finished the prologue for my original sorry "the faintest light. https://www.wattpad.com/story/164593274