@-LadiesMan217- Hello, it's a very good story. Not sure if I agree with the stuff you put into the story but hey we all have our own opinions about relationships and I respect that. Anyway about the story, I can't think of anything to criticise at the moment as I'm not finish reading yet.
Hey little angel!
Sorry to bother you, I came to invite you to read my Anakin Skywalker story.
Thope you like it, thank you for your attention <3
https://www.wattpad.com/story/371287080?