@22Satakshi
i'm glad you appreciated my comment. i stopped writing comments to writers after i received a very rude reply from one of the writers. i never intend to write hateful comments. in that story, the writer kept saying that her aim was writing about forgiveness, kindness and that crap. but the ending was so heartbreaking. the male character was asking for forgiveness. he never intended to rape her. he was played upon by his friends and drugged. the female character was the victim. it would have been ok if the writer ended it with their parting. but the male character, being rich and heartbroken, still flied his jet only to be struck by lightning and totally burned. he was unrecognizable. there was no remorse in the female character and i did comment that how come she was writing about forgiveness and she wrote the female chac not forgiving at all. i even asked her if she was aware that dying by being burned alive is the most painful kind of death ever to be encountered by a person who was asking for forgiveness. she replied that she will never remove her story from wattpad. the hurtful thing about it was that she tagged me as a hateful comment. i was motivated by your story to start writing a comment at the end. i am a retired teacher. i used to teach english so i couldn't help but add corrections to your story. i was just keeping my fingers crossed that you won't tag my comment as hateful. i really want to see young, starting writers to follow their dreams and later, to come up with best sellers. people like me, still turn to reading books instead of watching netflix or other movies. reading stirs one's imagination. and it takes a good writer to stir the reader's imagination, like you. as i said, good luck.