EjDoggo123

Is gwain saga prime going to continue?

Vermaglo

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THUNDER2OO5

hello bro, how are you feeling? :)

THUNDER2OO5

@24aonl Don't worry bro, I understand your situation, take your time ;)
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24aonl

@THUNDER2OO5 Feeling alright. It’s college time now, lmao. Though I’m doing my best to catch up on stuff.
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Cyth____

Yo man, how's it goin

Cyth____

@24aonl hope ya doing good. As much as I like to see more chapters, don't push yourself 
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24aonl

@Cyth____  Sorta alive at the moment. Doing two chapters two make up for lost time rn.
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THUNDER2OO5

Hey bro are you alive?

THUNDER2OO5

@24aonl Don't worry bro, take your time. :>
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Cyth____

Good to see you back, and regarding the latest chapter, I feel like you should have made Clint actually surprised regarding the 10 million lives lost on the teorans, giving him a clear reason why they hate humans so much and then explaining the world wars, something like:
          
          "10 million? Oh god no wonder why you resent us, but didn't that happen quite long ago?"
          
          "Do you have any idea how much is 10 million teoran lives?"
          
          "Yes, as a matter in fact, hell we even experienced it more. In world war 1, over 20 million casualties were recorded, for EVERYONE involved, and in world war 2 it was over 80 million. The reason for the first one was because of an assassination, that 2nd however was because there were people who believed themselves to be superior to others, and just didn't like how the other people and their cultures. Million of innocent people, no matter how old or how young where purposely slaughtered just because of how they believed in God, and yet we still forgave the next generations of those because we know not to blame those who had no involvement
          
          And that was decades ago"
          
          Something like that, it's just a suggesting 

Cyth____

@24aonl yeah that's why I'm suggesting, the way you mentioned he had a face that read "pathetic", it makes Clint not give a damn about the suffering of the Teorans 
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24aonl

@Cyth____  Hmm ok. I’ll make some improvements later, as this whole new chapter, as I mentioned,I kinda speedran just to get something out of the way. But yea.
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