24jeremy

if anyone reads this. I'm creating a story called Pamphonelle. read my prologue and let me know what you think so far thank you.
          
          even hateful opinions are welcome.
          just need someone else's opinion.

Whoever is looking at this please support my work or critique it which ever just read it thanks!

Can you guys check out my book fairy land and leave some comments. Let me know what you think about the theme and characters, please pretty please. Thanks.

Using my phone on Wattpad, my laptop is down and I am sleepy hoping to update soon. I will start writing once I am awake.

Do it now cast the spell, before anyone can tell! As the coin falls into the water, make one thing into another! Alchemy is science as well as art, we it guardians must do our part. Flitter about before night is done kidnap your victims and return anon. 
          
          The children into beasts we'll make, sheep, goats and dogs to tame. We'll turn all sadness into fear, say our magic words and dismiss mirth from the air.
          
          Then out fear we conjure rage, reciting chanting, turning the page, and then it's time the magic circle must be done. Remove the hurdles in happiness must come. 
          
          We finish our timely spell with care, daylight has yet to visit here. So into the air we fade away leaving our spell book to greet the day.
          
          
          NB. I love using metaphors when writing. This poem is about the writing process, specifically completing books you start. To many writers give up on their work!

Sometimes life seems like the most precious thing, then again sometimes it seems like nothing we will ever have value. After all one day I will not exist, I won't have any memories, I won't remember loving you or being happy. I won't know you exist I will have forgotten you. I won't even be able to remember myself. One day I will just be dead, all that I am will be gone with me.