27TheEnd

Looking for someone to take over thanatophobia 
          	
          	Won’t be posting any more chapters 

27TheEnd

@Theoreakan_bitch lols, haven't logged into this account for ages. u can if u still want too ‍♀️
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Theoreakan_bitch

@27TheEnd  if your still looking for someone to take over i would love to
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27TheEnd

Looking for someone to take over thanatophobia 
          
          Won’t be posting any more chapters 

27TheEnd

@Theoreakan_bitch lols, haven't logged into this account for ages. u can if u still want too ‍♀️
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Theoreakan_bitch

@27TheEnd  if your still looking for someone to take over i would love to
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27TheEnd

Did J.K Rowling really add slavery into the Harry Potter universe, then proceed to say that the slaves enjoyed slavery while also making it seem like Hermione was a bad person for wanting them free and making Dobby seem crazy for wanting freedom?

Nimisha893

Dammm, didn’t think of it that way…..
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mypotatoranaway

YES SHE DID URGH 
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27TheEnd

Hi! New Story!
           
          It’s called star crossed lovers, it’s a Harry x oc.
          
          We know the story of Romeo and Juliet. The lovers who opposed the stars. However, this is the story of two people. Who fell in love despite the odds against them. A Hufflepuff and A Gryffindor. Why no one had seen anything like it. Read on as we dive into the adventure of Regulus Black's daughter.
          
          Harry Potter x OC

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27TheEnd

Heyyyy,
          
          Omg ! We hit 50kkkkkkkk. I’m so happy right now. I really hope you all keep leaving comments and suggestions on Thanatophobia. It going a bit slowly at the moment so I want to speed a few things up.
          
          I love you all and stay safe!
          
          Have a good morning/afternoon/night 
          
          @27TheEnd 
          

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ilikepizza146

@27TheEnd I cant wait for more!!
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voidpottah

Heyy 
          Your book is amazing! 
          I just wanted to ask, how can I make my book a bit better? Please give suggestions:))

voidpottah

@27TheEnd Thank you so much <33
            Your review and opinion means so much to me❤️
            Hope we can be friends <33
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27TheEnd

@voidpottah I really enjoy your book so far! 
            
            The only advice I could give is to describe things more. I've found when you don't actually say actually the object/scene immediately, the readers try to figure it out which makes them more engaged in your writing.  You could also structure your book in a way that makes it more engaging (Flashbacks or cliff-hangers). You can throw in some hints regarding the future plot, which also engages the reader. A key thing I've learned as a writer is to not use the same adjective or word repeatedly (said, amazing, etc.). You shouldn't repeat the person's name in a non-speech paragraph. If you're making the subject about one person in a paragraph, it's better to use their pronouns (only mention their name once or twice). If you want to make the subject about another person, then start a new paragraph. 
            
            I hope that was helpful!
            Please come and talk to me again if you want more advice, I haven't finished your books SERENDIPITY ⋆ H. Potter Twin [1] & Everything has changed, so I would probably give you more if you want in future chapters.
            
            I love how you're going so far, please continue writing!
            
            Have a good morning/afternoon or night
            
            @27TheEnd
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