athlete68

Thank you for following me and for your comment! I totally see your point, and if I was still writing it I’d take t into consideration. I agree, but your third point is the direction I tried to take the book in and hopefully it’ll be more revealed later on in the story to you, but I tried to take the quality of cleverness and use it. Please let me know what you think as you progress through the story and by the end of it!

athlete68

Thank you so much! Okay that’s good and gotcha thank you for the feedback!
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2Gold2

@athlete68 I finished the story, amazing! As I read i saw a little bit more  clever acts that percy performed though i still think it needed to show a little more
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