Hey 2cold hope you are doing good <3
Your story “The Date / Fairy Tail story” I really liked it I like how you wrote it specially the emotions between Y/n and Lucy
Also action parts are really interesting they make the story exciting and not boring at all. I also like how you mix comedy, romance, and serious moments together it makes it very fun to read for me haha
few suggestions from me i think maybe you can slow down a few emotional or action scenes a little so they hit even harder, and add a bit more detail in transitions so everything flows more smoothly. That would make the story even more powerful
Overall I really enjoyed it and Im excited to read more chapters!! thankyou